###***"what do you see"***###

{women}-

open your eyes,

now take a look.

No,really take a look

What do you see.

{man}-

My eyes are open ,

you know what I see,

I see beauty,

I see a love far more beyond my greatest imagination.

I see a scared women,

afraid to give me the love she has to offer.

I see a broken heart.

some1 has torn it apart.

I see tears falling down her cheek

I see my hands wiping the face of someone so sweet.

now what do you see?

{WOMEN}-

I see brown skin

I see brown eyes

I see a man who has so much to give

I see the reason to live

I see my new love

I see my old lover walking away and me not caring

I see you, I see me

I see my new future

which is destind to be.

{man &women}-

We see each other

and no one other.

we see love

and all of that and the above

Author's Notes/Comments: 

no reason to really write this just wanted to do a poem that has role plaiying

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Colin McNamara's picture

A very interesting perspective of writing your poem... gives off a clear message, but leaves the reader intruiged with the role playing thing... hopefully you'll keep up the technique