Boundless Love

Oh love how far you reach
how far you'll go
how you would cross the weathered seas
and push through the lowest of lows
how you would not waver in the darkest valleys
or stumble at the sight of terror
love, oh love
where is it that you find your courage?
where is it that you muster your valor?
does it lay in the deepest corridor of ones heart?
or does is it solely rest in ones mind?
oh love, love
do not ever falter
do not ever die
for this feeling that you bring
these thoughts that you arise
can bring any man to die
for the one who in her heart his love resides.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

For valentines day ;]

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SSmoothie's picture

It's good! But...

I would delete the whole yet membrane line :) it doesnt really fit or serve a strong purpose and reads far better without that line. Otherwise, good work! Cheers SS

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Thank you! i really

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