Spring Time

The frogs will croak, the birds will sing

the song of life for everything.

The water will run, the trees will sway

its a sign of peace in every way.

So let nature rejoice as it awakes

from a hard frozen winter to a

beautiful spring day.

~Deziraye Wald~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This was the first poem I ever wrote. I was about 11.

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J Goff's picture

beautiful poem. :D lovin this one.

Sally Stark's picture

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! thanks for critiquing my poem...lol, did you look at any of my other stuff, because thats really not how i write, lol. Well it was that time...but this poem is pretty, and it stands out from your others in that it's positive. I'm glad to see it here. :)

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

agree