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M WHAT I M
A little crazy at times I am
ok , ok...maybe a whole lot crazy am I
part of my charm.....thinks me
laughter, nourishing me
volatile at times I am
crusader of world injustices am I
children starving., needless perjudice.....enrages me
cold world, strangling me
haunted at times I am
scared somedays am I
ghosts from the past......chasing me
running never resting, exhausting me
forever searching I am
grounded, and yet feeling lost am I
knowing what I want......dreams eluding me
so many unanswered questions, entice me
creature of the night I am
lights dim and a dance floor diva am I
music pounding........taunting me
feet moving , hips swaying, healing me
a volcano of emotions I am
excessively intense am I
lifes events .......consume me
a heart of endless reserve.....comforts me
sensual addict I am
erotically needful am I
intimacy lifesblood.......to me
love not yet tasted...........rejuvenates me
a true blue friend I am
devoted to those I love am I
complying to their needs.....satisfying me
wrapping my soul in their warmth.......completing me
Jo-anne When we at into ourselves we discover we are all much the same - yes, we are a little crazy - maybe even lots, lol! I love this poem!! Regards Donkerman
OHHHHHHHH BOYYYYYYYYYY COULD I HELP YOU HERE.....heheheee
Gentle is the night♥
Absolutely loved this from the opening line: "A little crazy at time...." to the end: "....completing me." Why not a tribute to one's own self... great job!!! Amy
Gentle is the night♥
Jo-anne, I am so glad you stopped in and read a couple of my poems. Now, after reading your Night before court and this one, I think we are a lot alike. This life has a lot of pain, but it is also sensual and laughter abounds. Yes, I have just started writing poetry back in Nov. and I am learning a LOT about myself from that fact alone. Great work. Keep writing and pounding on that typewriter!! Congratulations on being in the Top Ten!! Linda
Now I know you better. Yes my dear friend, you are what you are. At least you know! Very interesting you are... very interesting in deed. Great peice, nice work. I enjoy you. Doug
a neat poem. I liked it. Its honest and open welcome.
WOW, burdens of problems rest apoun healed shoulders and yet you still walk with wouded knee with a smile apoun your face. Very sweet and powerful, And yes just the icing on the cake. Very well put. I love this one.
JoAnne, I really enjoyed this piece. Very thought-provoking ('I was thinking Who Am I?') And, I thought a very honest poem-(admitting to things less than perfect, but human, ie: being volitile as we all can be at times) I especially love the way it is put together, the form of I. Each line similar and relative to the last and the next. Very neat piece!! Glad that I stopped in!