Life is Ever Changing

People come

and people go

Life is ever changing



Relationships form

friendships anew

The world keeps turning



Somethings born

somethings die

Circle of life remains



Flowers bloom

love flourishes

Flames continue burning



Days are long

nights grow short

Time is slowly fading



Time starts to fly by

only getting faster

Everything starts aging



Babies grow up

adults move away

Life is ever changing


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munchkin's picture

Thank you for the advice. I didn't think it sounded finished as well so I removed the last stanza until I can finish it. Once again thank you

mpr8888@yahoo.com's picture

i liked this until the very end. it sounded like you wanted to add more by using the last stanza. the second to last would have left a complete verse in my opinion. it's still a nice thought though.


MR