The Inhibitor

My finest creation
runs amok in my mind
resenting his purpose
burns all his bindings
a dirge is his heartbeat; its okay, take your time
he has forever, but never is fine
I see you grinning in your corner
patience absolute; you've stolen it
claimed it was a gift
writhing flames yearning freedom
none allowed to see; oh the irony
He grows day by day, gaining cognizance
questions the strength of invisible walls
oh they exist, I assure you
farther away than possibly imagined
close enough to rake your talons
I want to love you, little one
they told me you were evil
perhaps one day I'll feel the sun
no more will I believe them
I turn my head another day
bleed just a little more
soon the walls will dissipate
hand in hand we'll destroy the world.
We wait.
Remember I'm not the enemy.

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SSmoothie's picture

Dang! You give good write!!!

I feel so... satisfied! Awsome mind F***!


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ashes_twisted's picture

Sick!

And twisted!

Close enough to rake your talons.

Ugh I love this line for some reason!

Poof!
Went my eyes as they feasted on your creation.
My blood and adrenalin are coursing.
What talent!
What jealousy I feel within me!
You've done it again.
Impeccable!
=^.^=


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo