Dinner but I ate.

Folder: 
Stuff?

So you walk out of the room as you answer your phone
sounding all business like. Business dinner... at 8...
And yeah, you asked me to come,
but you made it sound soooo boring.
Why would I even bother?
I hear the slight raises in your voice pitch.
A singer for years I recognise that tone.
I Iron your shirt, and lay out your pants
and matching crocodile shoes and belt.
Socks, I tie your tie; a little tight, you complain.
Your socks match your kalvin klein jox,
you know the ones for "special occassions" ...
I take your jacket out and raise it behind you.
Armani must be some pretty important business.
You grab the arm of your jacket and turn yourself into your suit.
and lean in to kiss me... I passionately kiss you and fondle you
Unzip your and force you to sit, I finish you mouth full...
I've ruined you for that bitch tonight.
I saw the way she looked at you
when I dropped your wholewheat wraps at work.
that didnt bother me,
it was the way you looked at her.
You look down at me, You sure you wont come?
no, thanks Im not hungry, I already ate.

View moonshadow's Full Portfolio
Fitzgerald's picture

Wow.. You're an incredible

Wow.. You're an incredible writer. It all comes together perfectly and your thought process is something else.. In a good way. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

SSmoothie's picture

You have this way of twisting things up

and describing them. You have got some raw talent my dear! I love this line-

I saw the way she looked at you
when I dropped your wholewheat wraps at work.
that didnt bother me,
it was the way you looked at her.

some powerful stuff there I really enjoyed this but for unorthodox reasons. I cant explain it.. but gees you are good! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."