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Emotional Overload
Alone again attacking away familiar feelings of aching
Bloated bones bursting brain the secret signs of burning
Consistent crying cursing craving wishing wanting crazying
Emotional overload
My sould is floored
Feels like I've been hit by a lightning rod
It's all coming out, everything that was stored
Someone please decode
This emotional overload
Dangerous dark disturbing desperate thoughts tormenting deeply
Empty echoes eliciting energies that torture endlessly
Fanatic fantasies far-fetched fatalities ubiqutous and fruitlessly unfolding
Emotional overload
My soul is floored
Feels like I'm being abhorred
It's too much, I think I'll go backwards
Someone please decode
This emotional overload
Groan! Gnash! Gurgle! Gasp! Cough! Choke! Gulp!
Heaven! Hell! History! Hysterics! Omigod! Overload! Help!
Emotional overload
My soul is floored
Feels like I'm speed-driving along a slippery road
Just point me towards the Straight-jackets' ward
Where someone will decode
This emotional overload
beatiful poem.
outstanding alliteration makes the poem palpable and sing with meaning; an emotive rendition about our wicked humanness.
milton
Thank you!
Thanks for reading and for your comment. I had fun writing the poem :-)
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WOW! i really liked that. it has a kind of throbbing beat to it, which i really cool. its one of those rhythms that wont let you stop reading. keep it up!
~ahsi
Great poem, seems like that's the way I felt not that long ago when I found out my now former boyfriend was lying to me.