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Forsaken
Born dying
Die trying
Try crying
My tears~
Still hating
Hate waiting
Wait abating
These fears~
Always wanting
Want flaunting
Flaunt taunting
It seems~
Inside aching
Ache breaking
Break forsaking
My dreams~
By, AMR
Interesting poem. I don't think I have seen that done before---using the last word of the previous line to begin the following line. Is there a name for that? Anyway, very nice, interesting effect.
kat
