Love Theory #1

Love is subtle and sublime.

 Equality does not exist in a dicussion where love has relevants.

 It doesnt break even,

 the pieces are shaped like ink blots,

 pointed edges,

 and the surfaces rough and jagged.

ITs hard to touch on the note of dead subjects,

yet on the other side the sky so blue,

 and the clouds all white and fluffy.

reguardless, you are dancing with a shark,

its not that humans are human.

Its that love is a drug, and we are human.

And to be rational, is irrational.

We are animalistic,

 and love is a old instinct,

 one that has caused our down fall

 over and over again.

 It has always been this way,

 even today.

We loose intelligent thought by default,

barbarians,

 we love with primative hearts.

 

 

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it sounds finished to me :)

it sounds finished to me :) but its not my poem so i can be wrong :)