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Vodka Veined
Plastic embittered harridan
Edging into the cauldron
Vodka veined beaten up face
Like a bag of spanners
Black edged petals float and fall
Perverted paranoia malignant
Twisted silk flowers
Braided in her moonshine hair
Calamitous rogue, denim clad
walking on white hot coals
Thumbprints degenerate wearing gloves
Surrendering to pristine graffiti on walls
Young water sprite
regressed into a fervor of fury
Achingly nimble, tiara balancing
Feathered and quizzical
Run-down vintage car
rooftop gazing at tempestuous trees
The inanimate flirting with polite ease.
Plastic embittered harridan down on her knees
The tiara makes her stutter.
Gabby
I think this is the best one yet. Keep reading different things into it.
Excellent and keep it up
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OOOO, now this is ripe with truth. I am beginning to see a whole new aspect to your depth of perception and I ain't talkin' the 20/20 kind.
Marvelous look at tragedy in the stewed mind of a once glorious beauty trapped in a world in which she no longer holds sway.
Sexual inuendo clarifies the disease as if in some way lust can become lustre.
Love it, just love it.
The words slip out like a moray from the crevices in the coral, seizing the mind with like a scorpian's whip.
This definitely has impact! An'it be the mostest bestest goodly thing I has seed in a while! :) Tim