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You see, we’re all on a mission,

All us preachers, poets, musicians

We’ve been called to a position

He named the Great Commission

It starts with perfect submission

And knowledge of the human condition



It’s a task that gives us definition

We’ve embarked on an expedition

As we stand against the opposition

His word is our ammunition

Our goal is the world’s recognition

And the enemy’s demolition



The story begins with creation

Since before the first temptation

When God laid the foundation

And made us in His relation

But sin became His frustration

Until His son died for our salvation



That is the most concise explanation

We rejoice in the realization

And stand before the congregation

It brings about our transformation

While the angels sing in celebration

Heaven becomes our destination

Rewrite 2012

You see, we’re all on a mission,
all us preachers, poets, musicians.
We’ve been called to a position
He named the Great Commission.
It starts with perfect submission
and knowledge of the human condition.

It’s a task that gives us definition.
We’ve embarked on an expedition
as we stand against the opposition.
His word is our ammunition.
Our goal is the world’s recognition
and the enemy’s demolition.

The story begins with creation
since before the first temptation,
when God laid the foundation
and made us in His relation.
But sin became His frustration
until His son died for our salvation.

That is a most concise explanation.
We rejoice in the realization
and stand before the congregation.
It brings about our transformation
while the angels sing in celebration.
Heaven becomes our destination.

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Inspired by: Bullet by Mat Kearney

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Intelligently conceived notion, ride on to great heights. Success!