Pain fills my skies
consuming my heart
with darkness.
Artificial light dances
across the black
and tempts my eyes.
I am not swayed
by his movements
meant merely to tease.
The stars appear,
and my path is lit
by celestial enlightenment.
A constellation
of promises remind me
of the coming morning.
Hope breaks on
the distant horizon
and soothes my heart.
Your use of metaphor is splendidly brilliant!
Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]
Hope breaks on
the distant horizon
and soothes my heart.
sure its true and i agree with your idea... the poem is well written and heart touching one ... well done j for this sweet poem... liked it enough...