Hope Dawns

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Pain fills my skies

consuming my heart

with darkness.



Artificial light dances

across the black

and tempts my eyes.



I am not swayed

by his movements

meant merely to tease.



The stars appear,

and my path is lit

by celestial enlightenment.



A constellation

of promises remind me

of the coming morning.



Hope breaks on

the distant horizon

and soothes my heart.

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Inspired by “Sorrow” by Flyleaf

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Starward's picture

Your use of metaphor is splendidly brilliant!


Starward

Afzal Shauq's picture

Hope breaks on
the distant horizon
and soothes my heart.
sure its true and i agree with your idea... the poem is well written and heart touching one ... well done j for this sweet poem... liked it enough...