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Hope Dawns
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God (Inspired by) Pain fills my skies
consuming my heart
with darkness.
Artificial light dances
across the black
and tempts my eyes.
I am not swayed
by his movements
meant merely to tease.
The stars appear,
and my path is lit
by celestial enlightenment.
A constellation
of promises remind me
of the coming morning.
Hope breaks on
the distant horizon
and soothes my heart.
Your use of metaphor is splendidly brilliant!
Starward
Hope breaks on
the distant horizon
and soothes my heart.
sure its true and i agree with your idea... the poem is well written and heart touching one ... well done j for this sweet poem... liked it enough...