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General Thoughts on Love Can you miss someone
who was never there?
Can your body ache
for a touch
you've never felt?
Can your lips
become parched
from the lack
of true love's kiss?
Can you survive
without it?
I need love
like the blood
that flows
through my veins.
I need you
because you’re
the reason I live.
Without you,
there’s nothing
to hope for.
I see ashes_twisted's point
I see ashes_twisted's point of view. For me, the ending was a little off - however, some of the lines ring oh so very true ("Can your body ache/ for a touch/ you've never felt?)
Damn right it can. Desperate stuff, not that fun to write about, but this is, overall and despite the slightly off-key ending (just for me, that is) all the more intense for its concision.
"Satellite's gone
up to the skies.
Thing like that drive me
out of my mind.
I watched it for a little while:
I love to watch things on TV." - Lou Reed
Captivating.
Fascinating.
I feel there could be more to it, but I enjoyed reading it.
You have that kind of talent that sucks the reader in and they can see, feel, taste, smell, whatever it is that you write about.
In the end it's captivating.
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo