Let Me Help You

You can give me all the advice you want,

but I no longer hear your voice.

It has become a distant sound

that irks me awake from restful sleep.

Please let me be happy for once

even if you are still miserable.

Let my good influence take you

out of this pit you’ve fallen into.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

There’s nobody helping,
they smile and offer advice
but move along before the paint dries.

Inspired by "All the beautiful" by Aden Fisher http://blogs.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendId=2334425...

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