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Learning from the Past I walked on eggshells
trying to hide the real me.
But it was useless,
the slightest tap broke me.
I cracked like a egg
because I'm rotten to the core.
Let me say first that I
Let me say first that I disagree with your assertion in the final line, because someone rotten to the core could not produce the kind of poetry that you have. That said, I will say again how much I admire the way you deploy and control your metaphors.
Starward