Ruby Radish & The Isoscolese Caucastrophy

And when you lay down in the snow

You become an angel

And when the thermometer is red

You shrug me off

For rubies are rabies

Frozen into stone

And radishes are in their roaring 20s

Captivating freedom

And when the well runs dry

You steal its pennies

And when the yawning sun has set

You turn off the exit sign

View merkaba11's Full Portfolio
tags:
Todd Pack's picture

I don't know exactly HOW to respond--but this one hit me, particularly the title. FINALLY I found someone who posts as much as I do! What's with the bunny mask in the pictures? I dunno. Everything about your poetry and form of expression struck me. Don't quit! Sometimes, an approach like this knocks people off-kilter, and maybe for one brief moment the banality filter perpetually fixed over their heads like a cartoon logo of apathy will be dislodged long enough for them to look around and say, "Hey, there's a WORLD here!"

Todd Pack's picture

I don't know exactly HOW to respond--but this one hit me, particularly the title. FINALLY I found someone who posts as much as I do! What's with the bunny mask in the pictures? I dunno. Everything about your poetry and form of expression struck me. Don't quit! Sometimes, an approach like this knocks people off-kilter, and maybe for one brief moment the banality filter perpetually fixed over their heads like a cartoon logo of apathy will be dislodged long enough for them to look around and say, "Hey, there's a WORLD here!"