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with you
lost and lonely
feeling numb without you
lying here cold and alone
surrounded by memories of us
together as we once were
seeing you without me
breaks my heart in two
causeing me to fall
with no hope of rising
fall into the world of pretend
a world where i dont exist
i've lost myself in the moment
gasping for air
remembering the sound, the taste
the touch of it all
remembering your face like no other
remembering it all
remembering it with you
went through your few poems and other work, specailly this poem is soo greatly done with good idea..I am inspired alot from your talent and say you well done and just go and on... wish you like my poems too..bascially iam known as peace wisher poet few books published and let me share one famous say of my own regarding the peace..( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq )wish to be intouch with peace lovers like you... well done..
'fall into the world of pretend
a world where i dont exist'
...i likedeth that *nod*
And it's really inventive how you based it on a dream, vair originale
Oh annnnd i just got myself some Hanson tickets! HarHar! Goin to see them on the 21st. And I've downloaded their new album [it gets released in the UK in a month *groan*] but it rocks like two big things of rock! You must own it! Go, go, go!
Have a gorgeous day!
Laurenx