Let Your Hair Fly in the Air Please

To tell you the truth my dear,

I have fallen in love with your shiny hair,

Catherine’s hair in A Farewell to Arms seems slight,

After seeing yours being followed by the moonlight.


Oh symbol of beauty! Don’t be so cruel,

Let your gorgeous hair fly 'my jewel',

Since the air does wait to play,

With your hair everyday.


Let the beauty be born around you,

Free your hair, let it fly in joy, let it go!

bishu's picture

This is what is a true potentry!!!!!

This is what is a true potentry!!!!!.Not unexpected though since you know the language.Many many happy returns of such poems.Short & sweet.


Hair in the air fragrance so rare

Rosy lavender love my dear cathy

Your beauty I'll cherish forever

Moonlit hair in the night of nights

Poetry as yours will end all fights

This site waits breathlessly ....

For your posts to come by to read

Wish all maidens had long hair

With soft white skins ever so fair

Scared they are ..off to their lair



KingofWords's picture

Thank you

Thank you so much. Much appreciated.

Astral_Tides's picture

This is written so very

This is written so very well!

I love the energy bursting through my screen!!

Haha this is a grand masterpiece of awesomeness!!!

I wish I could see those pristine strands of silken locks!!!!




"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.



KingofWords's picture

Thank you

Thanks a lot for such wonderful words. :)

nightlight1220's picture

Beautiful, Ziaul. The

Beautiful, Ziaul. The sunshine of health is what we all could use a little reminder of sometimes. That it is attainable for us all. The sunhine that lives in us waiting to be nurtured. I must say, yours, to me, shines like a beautiful sunny day as well. Exuding the warmth of what this life has to give with your 'potenry'. Unique and humbly radiant, reflecting the light of the sun! Blessings.

...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


KingofWords's picture

Thank you

Thank you so much. Your comment is a great source of inspiration for me, honestly speaking.