An Abomination Like Me

what is this feeling

this feeling inside of me

so far from hate

leaving me speechless

is this what i think

no this cant happen

at least not to me



why cant this go away

(these feelings for you)

what am i feeling inside

(im feeling for you)

who ever thought id feel this way

(never i thought ever)

but i seem to feel this way



some one thats there

through good times and bad

all the smiles and tears

every breathe of air

filled with happyness

for this one person

could it really be...



why cant this go away

(these feelings for you)

what am i feeling inside

(im feeling for you)

who ever thought id feel this way

(never i thought ever)

but i seem to feel this way



i never thought life could be this good

the plusses so many

takeing eachday alone nevermore

in this fight with a friend

how could it be

some one who sees the real me



never again will i look back and cry

never again will i wish this death

never again will i take life for grantid

how much i thank everything for all ive been given

an angel forever how could this be given

given to a abomonation such as myself

i dont question

i just know ur from heaven



why cant this go away

(these feelings for you)

what am i feeling inside

(im feeling for you)

who ever thought id feel this way

(never i thought ever)

but i seem to feel this way

but it really is this is love

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An old Friend... An old Friend...'s picture

Wow this is so stunning to me, you have such an amazing talent and it shines through in your writing. When I read this poem, i think its to me, and that is how it is supposed to feel to a reader.
-An Old Friend

Laura T's picture

phil...i really like this but i really don't kno what to say about it lol i'm at a loss for words because now..I KNOW WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT! but....you just have to keep looking ahead and remember i kno that you are a great person you just have to let people come through and see you for you...always remember i'm your friend and you can always talk to me about anything :)
-LauraT

Molly K.'s picture

WHAT IS THIS ABOUT?OR SHOULD I SAY WHO? ANY WAYS IT'S GOOD JUST A FEW SPELLING ERRORS ADN WORDING CHANGES MIGHT BE GOOD BUT I LIKE THE CONCEPT.