my soul

ive tried so hard

but yet uve never won

the reasons slim down

my hopw is lost

love is gone

the morphine is wearing off



try so hard to have feeling

try so hard to not shred a tear

but they just keep falling

but no emotion comes out

these are the things i live and breathe



this pain is sinking in

behind the walls

behind every face ive pretended

i hope this world is satisfied

because inside my head is spinning

inside im going crazy

on the outside all you see is gray

but the inside is bleeding red



try so hard to have feeling

try so hard not to shed a tear

but they just keep falling

but no emotion comes out

these are the things i live and breathe



ive reached the end

cried to many tears

the only think i want

is exile from the land of the liveing

because inside my soul is dead



try so hard to have feeling

try so hard not to shed a tear

but they just keep falling

but no emotion omes out

these are the things i live and breathe

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Amy's picture

i like this one alot too i love u :P

Laura T's picture

phil...phil...phil....geeze good poem but remember your not dead on the inside i've proved that one to you all ready but good poem

Molly K.'s picture

"but the inside is bleeding red" >> maybe try saying blood red instead of bleeding red. just a thought.

"is exile from the land of the liveing">even me?
anyways all around awesome song i could totally relate adn feel like my emotions were one with yours. awesome job. amazing talent.