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death is waiting
The risk of not knowing what to do with what has been laid out there before you.
The dark shadows are standing there waiting quitly in tthe earier cold fall breeze.... They stand there waiting...... waiting for that knocking at your door..
They slowly approch with the wind eerrierly blowing at the back of there capes....
As they approch the warmth is sucked from the air becomming ice cold!
As we look around... all that we see is the emptyness that is set before thee.
gud
nice poem....loved it
The bones a really great
The bones a really great needs a grammar and spel check but you have the makings of an awesome poem here indeed! Good job! Talk to u soon! HugSS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I agree it's very good but
I agree it's very good but needs some fixing MS
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow