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Love in Gunshots

              i hear

            the shots

    thrilling

            the iron stuff in my body

            meets the iron

    hotter

       from the gun. gun          shot

            iron

             melding

      iron

       like lovers in play, bullet and blood together

        Love

  

                       Haunts

       i am the witness

       of this blood sport          love



       one runs in me

      one stuck in me.

   iron

    meets

         iron

       i am the witness

       Love in Gunshots


Author's Notes/Comments: 

what can I say.,,,,
this poem haunted me like hell wen I wrote it first...
yaar dis is not ma style, but I was fasinated by the theme.......
and Sasha ma proff. wanted me to try and write something disgusting, but maine digust mein bhi pyaar daal diya.
she was both shocked and impressed to read it.
I want your comments to raise this baby better..

temme
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I am waiting
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