Sappy {Revised 06/28/2k23}

{Revision}

My head on your chest, I hear the beat

Reminding me lover, we are complete

I wish you could see it, how happy I am

Somehow, I think, you could understand

Every time that you find me

I feel it sparking, sincere

Envelop me in it, whenever your near

I know that you love me

I feel that you care

I wonder, if ever, I'll stop walking on air

With you I'm not broken, I'm all that I am

Let's keep this forever, I don't give a damn

 

 

 

{Original}

I lay me head on your chest just to listen to your heart beat

it reminds me how much i love you and how you make me complete

oh how i wish you could see how happy you make me

but somehow i think you understand

because every time you take my hand

i feel something special, I feel something sincere

it's something i feel whenever your near

and somehow i know you love me

and i definitely know you care

still i can't help feel like I'm walking on air

because with you I'm not broken, you love all i am

Author's Notes/Comments: 

'its to my boyfriend....who else would it be 2?'{Original}

 

To my husband.. who else would it be to? 

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chris's picture

I really like this poem...probably b/c I know exactly what you mean and how you feel

Nero's picture

Who else would it be too...hmmm...god? Maybe god wonts some loving. Maybe he's lonely! But...seriously...I'm just gods little play thing right now so he can smite me if he wants to. Good for you and your boyfriend.

David Lopez's picture

thats cute i love the way it flows and it makes me sad ... hes lucky thats all i have to say