Your lovely smile

You came into my life silently
I remembered the first impression you left me
That lovely smile,
And I cannot help looking at those gorgeous eyes.

I convinced myself, someone like you would have been taken long ago
Oh lucky girl, if you existed, I envy you.
Could that lucky girl ever be me, I wondered.

You were ever so sweet
We could stay up chatting all night and not sleep

I didn’t want to let you go when you dropped me off
Will I see you again?
You gave me that lovely smile, and said yes.

The day we met up again,
You gave me the lovely smile when you were at my door
We danced the night away on the dance floor.

I whispered in your ear:
I am gonna miss you dear.

You hold me tightly,
And surprisingly,
Gave me a kiss on my cheek.

From then on,
You became so much more.
How silly am I,
To also expect so much more.

I became annoyed and angry
when I did not hear from you.
I am such a fool.

Are we lovers?
Are we friends?
Or are we just someone who crossed path and will be forgotten in the end?

Who are we?

Just when I was about to give up
You turned up in my life again
Giving me all the attention I wanted
I felt like a princess again
And I hope this will never end.

It took me so much courage
To say the three famous words.

But you disappeared on me
Once again.
Not returning any of my messages or calls
Do you even care at all?

One good friend of mine told me
All the things you have ever told me
Are lies

Oh I am, such a, such a fool.

This has to come to an end
We have nothing, nothing!
But your lovely smile,
Will forever be remaining.

Oh, your lovely smile.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I have been liking this boy for a while, he is about to go off travelling the world and I will not see him or able to contact him for a while.

Just written this poem, to express my feelings for him. This is actually my first poem...Not lying! so any feedback will be much appreciated :)

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redfeather7772002@yahoo.com's picture

Your poem

it was very well written for being your first poem ever--i could feel your inner turmoil over his leaving again

love2express's picture

Thank you :) Love is

Thank you :) Love is powerful, I just wish he knew!

Morningglory's picture

You have a lovely smile my

You have a lovely smile my sugary sweet.
And here you have flashed it once again at me.
I feel like I am going to fall off of my feet.
Every single time that we do greet.
I'll miss you while I'm gone, you can be sure of that.
But please do not forget me before I come back.

*I really enjoyed this as a first poem... good job!


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love2express's picture

My love for you can only grow

My love for you can only grow stronger.
Go, and search for what you always look for my lover.
But please do not forget me while you're gone.
I shall be here standing still,
longing to see your lovely smile still.

*thank you :)