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Goodbye
The time has come for our goodbyes.
For whispered words and gentle sighs.
Of memories flashing through my head.
Of better days spent cuddled in bed.
Of words of love and kisses deep.
Of waking next to you in sleep.
When did it go wrong…How and why.
Can we stop it. Should we try?
It’s far too late. The past is past.
With your cheating ways, the die was cast.
You cursed our love with all your lies.
All that remains are our goodbyes.
Author's Notes/Comments:
Um...I'm not bitter!!! Honest.
Well written! love the flow
Well written! love the flow too! great piece!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Move on. well said
Move on. well said
My Secret River
Loved it!
I think you really nailed this!
Thank you.
Thank you.
I can relate.
I really loved the beginning.
It 'tis so hard to let go,
but once you do...the fresh air is exhilarating~!
(^.-)
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
:) I really enjoyed this I
:) I really enjoyed this
I like how you put a dark and also personal twist on a famous poem's flow
not sure if that was the point or if you just happened to also write ina rhythm which is well known, either way I enjoyed the read :)
Much Love
Ashley