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the world is silent,

silently moving

from where i am standing

there's nothing to see

somewhere inside it:

a nobody moving

having a party

and spilling their drink

 

characters wasting

surrender to think

all innocence gone

to the empty instinct

hedonists hasting

and pacing to pleasure

running around

and then going extinct

 

something inside

is vaguely colliding:

every existing

is living in me

the moment of life

eternity touches

and mingles with time

becomes all to see

 

so tell me what is freedom?

what makes a man unique?

contrive for me a reason

to build or buy or eat

comfort or confusion?

apartment or the street?

self is self-defeating

there's nothing here to keep

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Sassylass's picture

Excellent

rhyme scheme.

,but I agree with KS, each day we go on,move on,surviving,looking forward,forged stronger because of these things you speak of..

do I speak without understanding?

i assure you,not!

Koko~


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

lizardking's picture

i am not sure

what am i speaking of?

the mundanity of life?

the despair of hedonism?

salvation comes in one form only.

Sassylass's picture

Yes

that is soooo true!

:)


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

KindredSpirit's picture

The largesse blows you away

Then we reassemble ourselves

To survive

Another day.

KindredSpirit