I see a lot of my self in you,

I also see the pain you try to hide, but it shines through.

I have been in your shoes, I know how you feel,

I also know that you pass it off like it is no big deal.

I hope that my wisdom can be passed on,

I know that deep inside, you are very strong.

For so long I felt like you hide from the world, and now I see that you have learned to embrace it,

Take a deep breath, step out into the world and face it.

You have to make your own way in this life, no one will do it for you.

Most of all, Dannie, to your self you must be true.

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little brother this one is for you i love you dannie

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it was decent, not the best poem ive ever read...you were wrong tho, i rule all aspects of my life with an iron fist, devoid of the trappings of emotion...you have a good night...and be thankfull i critiqued one...