*~My Dream With You~*

Floating in the clouds

In a dreamland full of wonder,

with stars glittering all over,

where the sun and the moon both shine at once,

And there is no evil, but love is everywhere,

I see people flying with wings then notice my own,

I see flowers from meadow to meadow, valley to hill,

Then I see you by my side holding my hand while we fly,

I get a feeling everything is complete,

Then i hear a buzzing noise; I open my eyes,

It was morning,

All was lost,

Except the memory of my dream with you.

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Sean McKee's picture

sorry im not very good at reviews but im trying. i thought it was good, great imagery and visual words. i would like to see other poems that you create. as a personal idea, i would like to see maybe different types of poem, rather than all love poems. dont get me wrong, they're good, but i want to see what else you can write. ok thats it. sorry if this review stinks which it probably does, but i tried.