We Promised


Remember the night we
promised many things together,
over a thin line,
across the world

I believed in you
and I am not angry that we fell short
Perhaps another time, I will kiss your soft lips
and the world will be as it once was

just know,
that I am here,
never gone.

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You are

so essential.
I'm wondering, of this beautiful work of heart…
Of your life through poetry, I feel a brilliant presence when I read your poetry thank you.
You give such meaning to all of your words, these ongoing intense love poems.
Truly remarkable!!!
I wish you and yours a wonderful holiday…
I will keep you in my good thoughts place.
And hope that sometime in the near future that you find your hearts true desire.


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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As always, your comments make

As always, your comments make my day and push me to be a better writer. I do hope you and yours a happy holiday as well.

"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.