Maybe I could wear
you like a sin
Clasp on a necklace of
dreams
a fleeting thought…
My lips drip
and for what
I only know chaos
and my heart is
like a spider…
closing up
beneath your flame.
In twelve short lines, you present two very powerful similes that make this brief poem very, very effective. I read lines 6-12 a couple of times before writing this comment, because the image is both so original and so striking upon the reader.
Starward
Breathtaking, written as though a page from your personnal diary for a secret love. Thank you for posting and sharing.
In twelve short lines, you
In twelve short lines, you present two very powerful similes that make this brief poem very, very effective. I read lines 6-12 a couple of times before writing this comment, because the image is both so original and so striking upon the reader.
Starward
Breathtaking, written as
Breathtaking, written as though a page from your personnal diary for a secret love. Thank you for posting and sharing.