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Breathing In Sin
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I hold your words like
a knife to the throat
Secrets, dipped in honey
Your deep whisper winding up to
my hungry ear
I caress your hair and
let your dress fall
like flowers ache for rain,
I want you
omg that last line is
omg that last line is powerful!! i think ur poetry is getting better as u write more!!
i mean, it was good before,
i mean, it was good before, dont get me wrong haha :)
Haha! Don't worry I didn't
Haha! Don't worry I didn't take offense. Thank you very much. I like this one too.
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
Breathing in Sin
Just one word... WOW... your words melted and waxed its feelings onto me without me noticing. Very very good poem - so little words but so much eroticism..