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Torn Apart
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just me I'm torn between two places.
I'm torn between two people.
I'm always in the middle,
Always on edge.
Who do I believe?
Who do I support?
How can I go on torn in two?
How can anyone live a full life,
When they are in pieces?
My heart has been ripped apart,
By two people seeking to hurt each other.
But what they don't realise
Is that in seeking to hurt each other
They have instead hurt me.
I'm gonna go out on a limb and guess that this is either about your friends, or you parents and either way it's a tough situation. Also either way, I feel you cuz my parents argue as well. They're three states away from each other and I gotta play referee.
About the poem (the whole reason I'm writing this) it's very simple but gets the message across. Sometimes pretty words and elegance only takes away from the message you're trying to get across. Good job and keep up the good work.
i wish things could be different for you. i wish i could help. i know you feel torn apart but both of your parents love you.
wonderful display of emotion...