Dance With Me

 

Dance With Me

 

dance with me tonight
twirl me across the midnight
take me to the stars

 

© LadyRaine

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The one disadvantage of

The one disadvantage of reading your work is that its intensity overwhelms after the second or third poem, and I will have to take a break for a bit. This poem touches me in one of the deepest places of my soul, a place that emerged, or evolved (however you care to describe it) in the second most cherished time of my life, October 1975 to December 1976. I do not usually disclose this to most people, but the effect of the poem upon me compels me to do so now. I did not expect to see a poem like this today, and it has left me overwhelmed in that penetrala of the soul where our most cherished emotions and memories dwell.


Starward

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I am so truly humbled by your

I am so truly humbled by your comments,
thank you so very much...