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Watering My Garden
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deliberate symmetry
Watering My Garden
pouring dreams
upon the landscape
of my life
reviving
parched moments and broken days
with tomorrow’s hope
© LadyRaine
This poem reminds me of the
This poem reminds me of the so-called "water dripping" lines of the fifth section of T. S. Eliot's poem, The Waste Land. He considered those particular lines to be the finest in the poem, but, in a much smaller space, you have said just as much as he did in that whole section, and you havd said it as well.
Starward
Thank you for your
Thank you for your thoughts,
I am truly touched...