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When?
how long should i wait?
how long will this last?
the same thing day in and day...
over
nothing changing
change is in the future but
when?
boring days of the sane
structured is what it's called
but repetitive is what it is
i want adrenaline to rush through my veins
but it won’t happen
not now, but
when?
anticipation is there
wanting something to explode
wanting something to excite
but everything is calm
just like the day before was
and just like tomorrow will be
i might as well make When come to me
.... maybe later
I think this is your best one yet. I especially like how you go to the end of a line leading the reader to expect one thing and then making it something else on the next line.