You are very dear to me and in part,

fill my life each and every day.

You bring such joy to this lonely heart

with all the things you do and say.

Our first meeting will take place in paradise,

our pent up emotions leading the way.

Stroking your cheek, our lips will entice,

And in our souls, we'll know it’s our day.

Our eyes will meet, our hearts will race,

and between us, no more sad, lonely miles.

We have waited a long time to embrace

in our Land of a Thousand Smiles

I will take you dancing among the stars above,

on a dark and magical moonlit night.

I will lay you down on bed of love

and in my arms I will hold you tight.

We lay under our warm blanket of stars

as the night breeze whispers my love.

You'll gently caress my body and make it yours

as the moon shines down from above.

Our ecstasy and passion will freely flow.

As we share each other in passionate bliss.

We will bind together and let our inhibitions go

With our first, deep, long, loving kiss.

To have your love would fill me with happiness

As I hope mine does for you.

If the day comes when you love me, I will confess

That my heart will know your words are true.

And I shall smile that smile you love so much

as I do for you right now.

Reaching up, I push a lock of hair, with a soft touch

And move it tenderly off your brow.

I take your hand and pull you to your feet,

We are together and ready to face all trials

Let us walk along, our love complete

in our Land of a Thousand Smiles.



© June 2000

Author's Notes/Comments: 

LadyHawke's Land Beyond The to a medieval and peaceful land, where romantic poetry and fine art consumes your soul.
Drift in the serenity and soft music, be at peace with yourself and let love set your heart aglow!

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Soul's Enigma's picture

Another passionate expression of love. Nice flow and nice images but I do feel you are forcing the rhymes which detracts from your thoughts and the emotional feel of the poem. I would suggest not worrying about the rhyme or a specific structure and just let your emotions flow out. I really do like your honesty and ability to describe the intensity of your love.