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REJOICE IN THE LORD
One day, when you stand alone in front of the Father
I hope you do it without any guilt or shame
And I pray for you, that you were BORN AGAIN!
Before you heard Him calling at last your name
What a most glorious day for us that will be!
When we go back to Him,the Father,from whom we came from
No more pain and tears ever, to stain our eyes and our cheeks
No more the enemy can deceived us and cause us more fear!
One day, will all stand in front of the father
And pray that for you also that will be a wonderful day
When you hear your Father,at last, calling your name
Come and Rejoice! forever with Him, you'll have your rewards!
Not bad, but if I may make a suggestion, you should use more imagery :)
Keep writing.