I REALLY WONDER NOW

Sometimes I really wonder now

Is it you or is it only me?

The things that at times you do

Don't make any sense at all to me



Why do you make it always so hard?

Not only for you but for the rest of us

Why do you choose to close tight your eyes to God?

When right choices is all you needed to do



I am sure by now you really know

You have to stop all this nonsense at once

The old hurts will dissapear one day as they came

And a garden in its place for you will bloom

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hey Dorian....
you dont know me but this is a really cool poem.... for its lenght being as short as it is you really got your main message across and didnt have to linger or jump from one subject or topic to another... i really like that it show's stability.... something i seem to lack like water right now.... i wish i had the mind you do...! maybe then i would actually get to where i want to go in life.... well yeah if you want you can read my poetry i am member stolensoul666.... or you can email me at burnner100@yahoo.com ... you jus seem like a cool positive person to talk to... i need more positive people in my life... bye- Sarah*