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Many Pictures Of Love
Battles in life
For you never won it seems
Dispair still cries for you hidden
Behind those very black clouds
Agonizing fears, completely
Covers with tears, your pain
Embracing love today, helpless
You cry all your nights and days
Visual pictures of all your love
Scribbled your broken heart in blood
Sheltered with your thoughts, run in together
Through all your flowing veins
Drowning discontent, comes out
To disturb your peace again
Your mind and your searing flesh
In tortured and bleeding verses escaping from your
Flowing red ...pen
Releasing from your head and
Soul....sorrows and some of your ....pain!
LadyDP2000(Dorian)
copyright@2001
Hmmm....quite a different approach here, Dorian...rather dark and suggestive of unpleasant elements ? Thought-provoking, and leaves the reader wondering ~~ 'Visual pictures of all your love Scribbled your broken heart in blood Sheltered with your thoughts, run in together Through all your flowing veins' This stanza stands out the most for me... clear imagery and strong tone of voice. Smilesz. If u can, please read my poem Picturesque from my second hall....it has 'pictures' too..though rather different from this gem of yours here. Smilesz.thanx.s