AFTER THE RAIN

Spreading

To all

Your good will and

Wishes of joy.

Romancing the clear

And blue skies,

Sending your message

Brimming of love

And hopes.

Kissing the happy

Clouds,

You give us all

Beauty and wonders,

After the rain,

In radiant colors and

Hues,

Appearing to

Me,

Like a short and

Musical,

Muted love song,

Reaping

The rewards,

Of all

That you'd sown!





Ladydp2000

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

My main ispiration with this one guys, is the wonders of nature, the rain,the skies and of course the awsome and beutiful rainbows.Enjoy the reading!

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Carla Mobley's picture

Sounds like love to me!

mizzscarlett's picture

What a beautiful poem. I always like to use rain in my poetry too. It adds an erotic/sensual feeling to it.

EVE SMITH's picture

My dear Dorian, I love the way that you showed God's love for us through nature. God gives us all the beauty to make our loves more beautiful. You have caught this so very well in your poem. I felt so much love and beauty. Thank you for sharing it with all of us. You are a wonderful and caring and loving person. God has given you so many wonderful talents. Not only writing of poetry or painting...but he has given you a heart full of love. God bless. Take care and I hope that soon we can chat. Love you my friend and my sis. LUV, ANGEL EVE SMITH

pudnsis1's picture

Dorian, Thanks for the uplifting way that nature flows swiftly through our lives. A reminder to slow down and absorb the challenges ahead and the sudden change of venue. Linda

Teresa Jacobs's picture

Dear Dorian, Hi! Love this poem. You have so beautifully described nature and all of it's magnificence. I would love to do more to help save the Rain Forest. Nature is one of our most precious resources. Thanks LUV Teresa!!! Happy Holidays to you and your family.

Floreann Cawley's picture

Dorian, I like this refreshing poem. It was simply lovely. Good work. Floreann :-)

Brian Richard Tucker's picture

Hi Dorian, God I just loved this poem it makes me feel so worm. It is really nice to have found a sight that has so many great poets on it and so friendly. I'd just like to wish you a very Happy Christmas

Sasha_J's picture

Hi Hon........ what a beautful poem.. makes me feel refreshed just reading it,,,*smiles* with love Sasha