VERSES OF LOVE AND DISPAIR

LIGHTS DISOLVING IN DISPAIR,

AS THE DAY GOES DOWN AND STARTS FADING IN

THE NIGHT,

TURNING  ALL MY THOUGHTS  INSIDE OUT

AND ALSO PLAYING WITH YOUR MIND.



AND LOVE IS LIKE  TWISTED BRANCH,AROUND THE BENT,

WITH ALL THE ROOTS EXPOSED AND LIFELESS,HANGING

THERE IN A STEEP DECLINE,

AND THROWN ACROSS, THERE IS DEAD ROSE STILL ATTACHED

TO PRICKY THORNS.



AND NATURE SMILING BRINGS REPOSE,NOW

UNDER THE BLUE LIGHT OF THE BLUE SKIES,

AND ALL CREATURES GREAT AND SMALL,

PRAISE FOREVER IN WONDER TO THEIR CREATOR, GOD!



LADYDP2000

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Brian  Mihok's picture

Is this just a simple pro-god poem, or is there a deeper part to it? It's late and I'm too tired to see it if there is, but its good

Roz Turner's picture

Hiya Well... it has been a real pleasure to read your poetry. Someone with so much talent.... I am in awe of your works. Thanks so much for sharing your poetry with us here. Roz Have a nice day :)