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Better Left Unsaid
How can one utter words
Which in reality has no meaning
How can one hold back
For silence, is misleading
Caught between a deaf ear & raging screaming
Sound, silenced the pleading
The second it was told
No longer a mystery
As you shattered the unknown
Gathered in spoken words
Emerged in multi tones
No depth in understanding
As you planned it
For now you are bare
Stripped down to nakedness
In your thought you needed to share
Misinterpretation to stares
Vulnerable to care
In the end with hopes to accomplish
Was remotely demolished
When will I ever learn
That the words you speak entrap you
To the ears in which
They’re heard
the powerful idea behind a simple phrase
It can be an amazing and wonderful to discover the powerful idea behind a simple phrase. And how that phrase leads to a poem. Tension creates many exquisite works of art. Contrasting emotions are plainly put forth in this potent piece. Ideas configured into an unassuming form, they become nourished in a universal theme.
This poem is a poem that would touch anyone, with echoes of the glare of society and its expectations. Masses murmuring for the truth in this world of instability. I just call it like I see it. Let the chips fall where they may. With situations revealed by images of wagging tongues that say nothing and tongues trapped in a battle with their own weaknesses. It is nice to see that you considered a way of expression that got your point across with an intelligent stance.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
wow sweety..im am blown away by that one.. you really got u some writing skills..im new to all this but u seem like u know about what u want to express and how to do it with style , fashion and feelings...im so glad..i came across u...i feel that your words relate to my ideas and thoughts..i have to read the rest of them..no doubt//