Sore

I miss you more than my mouth can explain,

All of these drinks won't ease my heads pain.
My ears need to hear you
Hands need to feel you
My lips suffer without your kiss.
My heart can no longer bare any of this.
Far too long has it been since my eyes have looked into yours,
All I am without you is sore.
 
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This is my first poem. I'd

This is my first poem. I'd really love some feedback, even if it's bad :)