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Thorns
The thorns cut me deeper and deeper.
The blood flows like a river.
The tears just keep coming.
I try to pull them out but they are stuck.
When I start to heal more thorns come after me.
They bury themselves deep inside my skin, Making each cut hurt more and more.
They take over my life.
I no longer smile.
I no longer laugh.
The pain eats me alive.
The thorns are visible to the world.
I wonder if they will kill me but what I can't see is they already have.
Is it time to stop all this pain?
Is it too late to save myself?
Can the thorns leave me alone?
There is only one way to stop these thorns but am I ready for this?
nice
Nice job on the writing
Thank you :)
Thank you :)
Is it time to stop all this pain? Is it too late to save myself?
I have spent the last half hour going through your work's/ But this one does both, Break's a old man's heart,and pisses Me Off/ breaks my heart that someone so young has so much pain....but what the fuck I can't say much about that. been there for 42 years / Is it time to stop all this pain? HELL NO !.....Get Mad, Fight Back...Believe in Yourself ....Most important Keep Writing , Vent ,Rage , plead , cry . whatever it takes . I've made it to the outskirts of Hell instead of right down town , So Can You..... I will be checking on You from time to time.......Just to watch You Beat the Odds ~ DD ~
Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces
A wonderful piece!!! and it
A wonderful piece!!! and it is NEVER too late to save yourself :) otherwise it's way to late for myself hahaha don't stop writing.
Thanks :) still working on
Thanks :) still working on saving myself :)