Days of rain

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Shrouded by the gentle murmur,

 

Of raindrops falling to break,

 

Upon the straw-thatched roof you join me under,

 

Patiently we wait.

 

 

I look upon you and wonder,

 

If I asked...

 

Would you stay?

 

Here behind the drawn curtains,

 

A veil water glassy.

 

 

 

And now,

 

As the ripples die,

 

The pitter-patter turns to silence,

 

You wake, turning to leave,

 

And I whisper...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Miiranda31's picture

I got chills from this

I got chills from this one.

Very well.

krishenm's picture

Can't take all the credit

It's inspired by a japanese animated film titled "Garden of Words/Kotoniha no Niwa". You might enjoy it if you liked this. Well.. assuming I accurately conveyed the movie's tone.

Starward's picture

Quite beautiful and sensual

Quite beautiful and sensual without descending into the tawdry.


Starward

krishenm's picture

I do try my best. I

I do try my best. I want to write more romance but it only comes to me rarely