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Understand "Me"
Cut it open watch it bleed
Dig in deeper to sow the seed
Never look back on this terrible deed
Keep on trailing this life I lead
Stagger because there is no fold
Slice harder with the blade I hold
Always down in the ice and cold
End my life if only I was so bold
I want tobe pushed aside
Leave me in the darkness so I can hide
Stop the voice with words of a lie
All alone I begin to cry
It doesnt help with all your lies
Ill end up all alone where i have my cries
Wishing someday I will die
As I push my fingers into my eyes
I do not feel like I am free
Truth of doubt beyond what you see
Ripped apart in my family tree
No one will ever understand "me"
This seems to be more like one of those poems you write and it sounds cool at first, but it makes no sense...then you go back and read it three days later and it makes perfect sense. i love the stanza...
"I want to be pushed aside
Leave me in the darkness so I can hide
Stop the voice with words of a lie
All alone I begin to cry"
That is so hot man... you really have been writing and making progress without telling me so...you freaking talented prick.
this poem sounds like it is talking about someone leading you on to love them and they don't love you back, then it veers off into talking about problems you cant control like the bad habits you got from your parents. You know Tyler, no one ever understood "me" either, that is, until i gave her a chance. Give someone a chance Tyker. You'll like what happens, especially if it happens with a female.
^^; I'll tell you what I *think* because I don't know you, like you said.
It sounds like you're an outcast, whether by choice or by the choice of others. Or does nobody understand who you are inside, not just on the outside? And now I'll say no more about what *I* think it means, because what I think really doesn't matter =P.
Amazing poem! =D I really like this. I would say that I could relate to it, but that's only by the way that *I* perceive it, not by what it really means. Either way, I like.
See ya,
-Monica