25 June 2002 - 6:57pm — Johnny Sachu (not verified)
You have talent. I would like to see serious attempts by you, however, to try to stick to a set form. I'll bet you could do well and grow. This piece was original and worth reading. The freedom of the heart to experiment is important. But, don't forget the past, there is much good there.
You have talent. I would like to see serious attempts by you, however, to try to stick to a set form. I'll bet you could do well and grow. This piece was original and worth reading. The freedom of the heart to experiment is important. But, don't forget the past, there is much good there.