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Yellow daisys have a smell

that says to others,  go to hell

If you don't like to smell this stench,

find yourself another bench.

On which to sit and think and ponder,

fields of yellow growing yonder.

Just how many little daisy faces

upturned towards the sun's good graces?

Hundreds,  thousands,  maybe more,

spread out along the forest floor.

Pick a dozen, maybe two,

take them home for me and you.

Put them in a vase of glass

with 7Up to make them last.

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starlite_angel's picture

Nice. I like this, I mean how could I not? It's about my favorite flower. Yuor very talented. So with 7UP eh? hmm thats something new. Take care.
Love Robin

onelilartist's picture

I LOVE THIS! The smell that says "go to hell". They may stink but they are truly one of my favorite flowers. Kim this is priceless.
Love,
Jessica

darkpool's picture

This is a pleasant piece, I love daisies too. There's a season here where diaisies grow wild everywhere ... and then there are black-eyed Susans, my favorite summer flower of all .. then the cornflowers of late summer!
I enjoy your cosy approach to poetry.

Ken