all life
at it’s core
comes from the sun
that solar furnace
the one place
in the universe
where the quantum and gravity
play nice
mass becomes energy
and energy becomes light
and absolutely everything
ignites
you said you
wanted to be seen
had so much warmth to give
the universe's a
cold and empty place
but you my child
are like the sun
where being becomes
light
and two become
one
Thanks!
Your ability to reach far,
Your ability to reach far, astonishingly far, and bring Heaven to Earth, the expansive into the human experience, giving both the honor they deserve, is a master class in sacred poetry.
Enormous accolades! Can’t praise this enough.
Thanks!
Thanks!
This is luminous, Karl! I
This is luminous, Karl! I love how you move from the vastness of the cosmos to the intimacy of human connection.
The sun’s fusion as a metaphor for love and presence is so powerful,
especially in the way you show warmth igniting meaning in a cold universe.
The closing lines about being becoming light and two becoming one are quietly transcendent.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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Thanks!
Ha, ha ... luminous! Thanks!